The Supporting Female Character Cultivates, the Protagonists Are Sacrificed to Heaven

I specially registered this account to leave a comment~ I originally saw this novel on Quark and thought it was great, so I'm supporting Queque! I think the most captivating character in this novel is Sang Ying herself. She is patient but not weak, she knows how to "cultivate her own virtue when poor, and help others when successful," she cherishes opportunities but doesn't plunder or take advantage of others. She's not love-struck, yet she attracts others with her strength and personal charm. She's truly a breath of fresh air among the countless female protagonists in online novels. However, I feel there are some shortcomings. While face-slapping is satisfying, making face-slapping the central theme feels somewhat weak. Queque's writing style is good, but sometimes it feels a bit rushed. Queque's output is extremely high—but sometimes there are many small errors like typos. I think Queque could reduce her output (at least I wouldn't mind…) and put in more effort. It would definitely be more appealing! Hardworking sparrow! Amazing...

The first Xianxia (fantasy/cultivation) novel I saw on 17k, and it's the kind of writing style I like. Keep up the good work, author!

The book review begins here, but I don't know what to write. I've been in the world of novels for seven or eight years now, and truly good articles are few and far between. The few gems that exist have gradually faded into obscurity or been abandoned, becoming a permanent regret. But recently, while browsing various forums and through recommendations from fellow readers, I came across your writing, and I realized that true gems never truly disappear. Every article, from its setup to its climax, needs the infusion of emotion within its structure to truly become a self-contained world. This requires extensive thought and refined writing skills. But the time you've invested is evident; your passionate, focused revisions and shaping are evident. The Sang Ying you've created, presented before me, is a truly real, flesh-and-blood person. Sang Ying, in her conduct and dealings with others, was neither arrogant nor servile, but always humble and polite; even when opportunities presented themselves, she did not exploit them excessively. There are far too many people on the righteous path who seize opportunities by force and coercion, possessing only outward appearances but rotten cores. Therefore, those who maintain a pure heart and steadfastly pursue their dreams are rare and precious.

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