In his previous life, Grandpa was a prodigy broker at the commodities exchange. Persecuted by business rivals who wielded dark arts, he went into hiding and died in seclusion.
In the New Era of Dongxia, in a parallel world, Grandpa was reborn, seventeen years younger than me.
When I was five, I was in a car accident and became a vegetable. Grandpa used his supernatural abilities to heal me, then passed down to me the secret art of Taiji Circulation Market Control. Guided by his memories of his previous life, Grandpa and I entered the business world to track down his old nemesis, who had long since been reborn in the same world. We were ready to avenge the past.
Wielding his skills to protect the good and uphold justice, Grandpa fought evil and helped the weak. His reputation soared, and he became a young business magnate, yet he still couldn't find his true nemesis.
The nemesis had been reborn as a tycoon, skilled in disguise. Backed by the prestige of his family's honored name, he possessed a shield that let him dominate the business world. He hid behind the scenes, grooming agents to wreak havoc across the industry and amass ill-gotten wealth.
Grandpa's rise in the business world threatened the foundations of his nemesis's wealth and domination. To secure his position, the nemesis was willing to harm the welfare of the entire business community. He laid traps to oppose the corporate investment group Grandpa had established, finally exposing his tracks.
Grandpa's fierce passion for defending fairness and justice in the business world reignited. He led the business community through several hard-fought battles, ultimately defeating the alliance of dark-art families that had been wreaking havoc on private capital, and preserving prosperity and livelihoods throughout the region.
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