About My Reincarnation as a Cat

Reading, below

Hey hey, I'm here~ Just finished reading the first chapter, so let me share my impressions. It's similar to the previous post by Xiao Chan; there are too many parentheses, which makes it a bit jarring. It's clear the author intended to create a rather silly novel. There was a system at the beginning, but it seems the author forgot about it later. System: I'm so pitiful, my master has completely forgotten about me, boohoo~ Haha, getting back to the main point, you can start with the system and make full use of it. Of course, you might encounter system-related issues later on, but I still suggest you make full use of the system in the first chapter. Then, that kitten that fell to its death also had a life, right? The author could give the kitten a memory too, so the male protagonist could recall what happened to the kitten. Wouldn't that make it easier for him to accomplish what he wants? It would also expand the plot—wouldn't that be a win-win situation? If the author wants to write a rather silly novel, they can let the characters experience more silly things, so it completely depends on what kind of novel the author wants to create. Haha, I'll leave the rest to you, Daddy! Go go go! (Of course, this is just my humble opinion, for reference only~😉😉😉)

Goodness, what a coincidence! I wonder if the author signed a contract to submit their work online. If so, I can only say that fate is just too ridiculous! Because I also want to name my second novel this! Although the second novel has not been signed or published yet, I have read it on the online platform. I discussed with the online platform that I would start the second book after the first one was finished, and the online platform agreed. Not long ago, the online platform instructor told me that a novel with the same name as mine had been submitted and asked if it was mine. At the time, I was curious about who could have the exact same name as me and was just about to look for it when, well, it came to me on its own initiative. No problem, since you've already signed the contract, I can just come up with a new name later. Besides, yours is urban fiction and mine is fantasy, so even if the names are similar, there won't be any conflict. All I can say is that fate is just too damn wonderful! I don't know if the author signed a full attendance contract or a one-click contract. After reading the first chapter, I feel that it should be a one-click contract, because I personally think that signing a full attendance contract is not enough. One of the author's major problems is similar to the problem I initially thought might occur: speech impairment. After all, being reincarnated as a non-human, the language barrier is a huge obstacle. The author's solution was similar to my initial idea, which was to add "meow meow meow" in parentheses. However, I quickly rejected this solution for a simple reason: readers would not feel any sense of immersion in the story! Let me share how I solved it: I assumed a unified language, so that both humans and cats could speak and that their languages were common. Since I'm writing a fantasy novel, this solution, while having logical flaws, is generally feasible. However, since you're writing an urban novel, a consistent language by default is definitely not an option. How to solve this problem is up to the author to figure out. In addition, there is another problem: excessive self-indulgence. It is clear that the author, like me, is a severe late-stage chuunibyou patient. Chuunibyou can manifest in daily life, but you can't manifest it in your writing. "Sorry, there was a mistake. Let's try again." "There it is, dam~" These two sentences are typical examples of self-indulgence. You might have a gentlemanly smile on your face when you wrote them, but readers will only feel awkward. Readers won't get your point. Even as someone with a similar case of chuunibyou (middle school syndrome), I found it incredibly awkward. Okay, that's enough. If I say any more, it'll just start cursing. We're so destined to meet, it's definitely not good to start arguing. I hope the author can read more novels while watching the anime and understand the tropes in the novels.

It's a light novel, which is pretty good. I mainly clicked in to see who could stay up longer than me. Time to go to bed early.