Quick Transmigration: I'm the Queen of the Escape Game

Sorry everyone, I've had gastroenteritis for the past couple of days and it's been really painful, so updates might be a bit slow. (´இ皿இ`)

Finally, I see someone writing an infinite flow novel like me.

The new book is a huge hit, keep it up!

This author's work is likely in the female-oriented genre, and quick transmigration is a relatively niche type of novel. First of all, when writing, the author must pay attention to repeatedly and carefully checking the book for typos, as this will affect the reader's experience. Secondly, let me share some suggestions I gleaned from this book. For quick transmigration stories, firstly, your protagonist should be unique, and their identity and character design should be carefully considered. To put it simply, when you travel to a certain world, the character you create will depend on that world, the mission, and so on. It's clear that the author's first three chapters are innovative, but there are a few too few points of conflict. The anticipation wasn't built up very well, and the background and other details need further refinement. That's about it. (These are just my personal opinions, from a male-oriented perspective, as I am a male-oriented author. I don't know if they're helpful to you.) No...

Stay calm and read.

Keep it up, China! Looking forward to your return visit! Thank you!

I'm so sorry, I said I'd leave a comment a long time ago, but I'm only fulfilling my promise now. Note: I'm a newbie to male-oriented online novels, and these opinions are purely my own. I've carefully read both of your chapters. Let me start with the strengths: 1. Your writing style is quite good so far, and more importantly, you know how to create vivid imagery, which is a real treat for readers who appreciate detail! Especially that knife scene; readers who enjoy mystery will love this kind of foreshadowing. 2. Sister, you're very clever. You've stirred up the readers' curiosity and desire to watch the drama unfold, which perfectly compensates for the fact that your novel can't start like a romance novel by immediately creating hatred. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. The above statement about not being able to quickly evoke feelings of non-awkwardness doesn't mean you can't create anticipation. Your initial anticipation was too short-lived; from the moment she found the intersection, there was little to no anticipation left. 2. As for the main storyline, sister ٩(๑^o^๑)۶, I wanted to quit after reading the second chapter where the protagonist escapes, because there's nothing to look forward to...

Keep it up, DaDa!

That's pretty good! Your other book is amazing too, get ready to become a big shot! 😁

I haven't read an article like this in a long time. I used to like it in high school. This article brought back so many memories. It's so touching.