The Idle King of the Tang Dynasty

I wanted to say it before but was too embarrassed to, and then you said you couldn't sign the contract... Okay, I'll point out the problem now. Don't be upset, okay? (If you are, just delete this.) 1. First, there's the issue of punctuation. The entire passage is mostly periods and commas, but quotation marks could have been used instead. 2. Next is the issue of paragraphs. Ideally, each paragraph should be limited to around three paragraphs, or no more than 75 words. Otherwise, if the paragraphs are too long, it will be tiring to read. 3. Finally, and most importantly, the first three chapters of the novel are crucial for signing the contract. Start with a major conflict and a captivating premise. Other elements can be added later. For example, if someone transmigrated into a zombie, the opening could immediately show them facing imminent danger, with a Taoist priest arriving to subdue them… If all else fails, you can read the first three chapters of other best-selling books. It won't take too long, just a few minutes. La la la, I'm done. I've just said what I was thinking. If you don't like it, just pretend you didn't see it, hehe...

Come see Ye Feng, la la la~

I've come to support your work. It's our first meeting, so I dare not offer any comments. I'm presenting this gift as a token of our greeting. I hope you'll keep in touch with the actors from "Heaven and Earth's Unbreakable Bond" and visit often.

I was drawn in by the author's ability to post 18,000 words a day. I can only say, you're amazing! This puts me, who only posts 1,000 words a day, to shame. 😓

Happy new week, Ye Feng! Hurry up and update! It's been twenty-six days already!

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