The Four Dark Drifters

Blessings for 2022

Sending you my blessings

Let's take a look at the masterpieces.

Why is it locked?

It's generally not recommended to submit the same manuscript to multiple journals. I think you have a lot of ideas, but you lack a bit of patience. You could try writing one book first...

Having read the first few chapters, putting aside the logic, I feel the beginning of this novel is quite chaotic. Not only is the description weak, but it's also not particularly appropriate to say... However, this might be due to inexperience or immature writing style; with more practice, it can be improved (perhaps the author has already corrected it, but I haven't seen it yet lol). Also, pay attention to paragraph breaks; personally, I feel that separating dialogue and plot is a better choice. This prevents reader fatigue and makes foreshadowing clearer... Furthermore, the author should pay attention to the description of appearance and environment to better highlight the character's tension and unease while escaping debt, thus drawing the reader into the plot. Overall, however, for a novice online writer, the author's writing is quite good. At least better than mine at the beginning [facepalm]. I just wanted to remind the author...