Juvenile
juvenile
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 40k Words
- Genre
- Romantic Youth
- Subgenre
- Campus Life
- Updated
- 4y ago
- English
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37Chapters
2.5kClicks
18Favorites
12Recommendations
28Comments
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The introduction is too long, although it fits the theme well and is well written. Well, after a few chapters, it's the kind of light novel set in a school with a stable plot. The protagonist the author wants to introduce is a person with a story, which can be seen from some details. We look forward to what comes next. Furthermore, I discovered that the detailed descriptions of scenery are all about cicadas, wow. I like the writing style, which is very lifelike.
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This is the first time I've read a BL (Boys' Love) campus novel, and to be honest, I was shocked. The writing is excellent; some sentences are like synopsis. You portray Shen Li's personality through subtle actions, and his social anxiety is so cute! Liang Shu is actually a looks-obsessed person, haha, that's really nice! The plot is not melodramatic at all. I used to think that campus novels were particularly boring. I had read several campus novels written by beginners and they were all similar to the same old formula. This book refreshed my view of campus novels. You can really see the innocence and naivety of the teenagers between the lines. I also wrote some BL (Boys' Love) stories in my own side stories, and I learned a lot from yours. Before I knew it, I had finished reading the whole thing, and I still feel a little unsatisfied. I will continue reading! There are some minor issues with writing habits, but overall there shouldn't be any typos or anything like that. The only problem is that there are extra words in the second chapter. Another issue is the frequent confusion in dialogue, making it difficult to distinguish which character is speaking. Furthermore, the author has a habit of using ellipses alone, further complicating the conversation. I suggest revising this as follows: 1. A: "…" 2. "..." A said disdainfully, "(Dialogue)" 3. A: "…" "(Dialogue)" A had no choice but to say. 4. It seems I don't know anything else... Finally, I suggest you review your previous chapters and promote them more. Things will gradually improve. Keep it up, author! I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story!
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Not bad!
It's well-written and feels very familiar. Keep it up!
You must persevere in writing!
After reading a few chapters, I feel the author's writing style is quite good.
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