Legend tells of a continent called Aoting, divided into four great empires: the Fire Source, Water Source, Earth Source, and Wind Source Empires, in the east, west, south, and north. Those on the continent who can wield soul arts are called soul adepts. The seven strongest soul adepts in each country are known as the Nobles, and the higher their rank, the stronger they are.
Twelve Silver Priests govern the practice of soul arts across the four empires, three in each. Trapped within crystal walls, they are unable to move freely.
Calling themselves the Twelve Gods, they have controlled the fate of countless soul adepts for millennia. To them, humanity is no more than a collection of pawns, tools to help them find or create perfect vessels. With those vessels, their dark souls can escape their dependence on the crystals and regain their freedom.
Gilgamesh was imprisoned four years ago for discovering the secret of the Priests. He has now been rescued, but the continent is already in turmoil. In search of perfect vessels, the nations have launched wars of conquest against one another.
Under the leadership and resistance of countless powerful people, the system of Priests has finally begun to crumble. The wars have plunged the people into misery and left even the most determined revolutionaries lost and uncertain.
The protagonist, Qiling, and his companions will embark on a difficult journey in pursuit of the "truth," searching for a way to save the people from their suffering and gradually uncovering the ultimate truth behind a history spanning ten thousand years.
Dear author, although I haven't read the original work, I feel that your writing is quite good, the writing style is excellent, and the details are very well described... (80 words of praise omitted) Now, let me offer a small personal suggestion. I suggest you write one sentence per paragraph. If the speaker does not use the word "speak" or "say," they can be separated directly. So, did he come out? The man put... Also, author, we're writing a novel, not an essay. There's no need to state the theme, the central idea, or the subplots or hidden plots. We want the readers to observe and then gradually find the answers, rather than having the author directly reveal them 🤣🤣🤣. Our three golden chapters were used by the big boss to reveal his trump card 🤣🤣🤣. You could combine the first two chapters together. Character analysis: ... Please save the detailed outline of Chapter 3 to the main outline. 😆😆😆 I understand the author's desire for readers to understand the content. I suggest that the author include the content of Chapter 3 in the author's notes below the article. This would be better, because some readers don't read detailed outlines. For example, content about a girl's body can be placed in the author's notes in the introduction, making it clearer for readers. Hunter 1-1 The rain in early spring... It's fine... Yet it feels like you're about to sink into it... Second paragraph: His profile was constantly moving with the carriage... (Oops, typo, you wrote "she" instead of "him".) Author, there's blood on the male lead's robes, didn't the carriage driver react at all? If the male protagonist had told the driver that he was injured in an accident. The driver's blessing was probably something like wishing them a safe and smooth journey, and incidentally suggesting where to get medical treatment for their injury. (That's roughly the gist of it; of course, wishing them a safe and smooth journey would have been sufficient.) On page 7 of Hunter 1-2, please note that you typed "he" as "she". Honestly, you write really well. I originally planned to read only three chapters, but I ended up reading many more! 😆😆😆 Please reread your work often; it will inspire you even more. Keep up the good work! (ง •̀_•́)ง
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Goodness, it's no exaggeration to say that your book title alone will deter 80% of readers, the subject matter will deter another 10%, the author's statement will deter another 15%, and the introduction will deter another 5%. Do the math yourself, how many are left? None! Do you know how badly Legend of Ravaging Dynasties was criticized in China? You couldn't possibly not know! If that's the case, why choose such an obscure and unpopular subject? Isn't that just asking for trouble? Also, you need to understand that readers come to read stories, not to listen to your author's nonsense. You start with a monologue, an introduction, and then spend two whole chapters talking nonsense! Do you think readers will enjoy reading a book that loves to talk nonsense and doesn't tell a proper story? Think about it carefully. Try to see things from the reader's perspective, read more books, and stop writing whatever comes to mind. Do you think it's possible to entertain yourself while also seeking approval from others?
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A truly captivating story, ingeniously conceived, and written with exceptionally delicate and engaging prose. I'll definitely bookmark this to read slowly, and I eagerly await the author's rise to legendary status!
I haven't read many male-oriented novels, so my comments are not very insightful. Please forgive me. I think your writing is really great. What attracted me the most was the introduction, which led me to the Tomb Raider Chronicles, because I like reading this kind of book. However, the author's main focus is not tomb raiding; it gives off a very fantastical feel, which I think is still great. I looked at the comments, and it seems like the big project is about writing about a book from a famous classic. There's a slight issue with sentence breaks in the article. Ideally, sentences should be separated into paragraphs. Separate paragraphs whenever possible to avoid visual fatigue; large blocks of text can be overwhelming for many readers. The author is very meticulous, marking all the locations. If it's a fantasy/science fiction story, I think this book is pretty good. But if you're not writing it in the way I understand it, haha, maybe I'm just being superficial. The author's writing style is okay, but the word count is still too low. You can only see a little bit of success when you look back at 100,000 words. Very few people can become a legend with just one book. I hope the author will not give up. Even if no one reads or comments, you can still persevere. Writing novels requires perseverance and persistence. As long as you keep writing, you'll develop great writing skills and eventually become a legendary writer. I suggest the author write this as a fantasy novel. If it's about a certain genre, I believe many readers won't understand it. The author could slightly change the pacing and make sure to update daily. Hard work always pays off, and I believe you will too. Keep it up!