The Four Lands crumble, divine power rules the world, and an ancient game of chess holds all living beings in its grip!
Long Mingxin is reborn in the flames, bearing the origin of chaos and commanding the world's only World Source.
The eastern frontier is rife with war, the Sonuo clash in technological supremacy, secret realms conceal mysteries of the world's origin, and dark forces manipulate the chaos.
Together with the Icebound God of War, a spirit-witch girl, an elven king, and other companions, he crosses mountains and rivers, breaks through dire straits, and defies fate.
The balance of power governs a chaotic world, while the winds and smoke shield its people. Gods and demons have contended for a thousand years without end.
When the ultimate conspiracy behind the divine race's rule comes to light, Long Mingxin challenges the heavens with a mortal body and shatters every illusion with the bonds he shares with others.
He slays the fate that has endured for ages and finally uncovers the origin of the Dark Sky!
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The front is usually better than the back.
It's well-written. The beginning is so-so, but the more you read, the more you want to continue.
Update check-in! The title "The Origin of the Dark Sky Rift" truly captures the core of the entire book. The Dark Sky Rift is the catalyst, while the search for the origin is the core of the story. The combination of technology and fantasy is so appealing, and the section on the technological capital was incredibly enjoyable.
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La la la, another update today!
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Well written! I noticed a few minor flaws, such as: the little white tiger's determined gaze towards Long Mingxin—it seems like one or two words were missing. Also, the dialogue ended with an exclamation mark; I personally think a period would have been more appropriate. I'll be following along for more updates.