This is my personal hell.
-- Huangfu Baiqian
Summer, Year 12047 of the Yongming Calendar.
Sea beasts landed and attacked the southeastern coast of the Yunya Continent.
Two months later, with the Huangfu family suddenly destroyed,
the Sea God Guard ended its eight-thousand-year vigil along the coast.
At this moment, I am the only one left of the Huangfu family in Linhai City.
My name is Huangfu Baiqian, and I serve as a lookout for the Sea God Guard.
All I have with me is a broken sword left by my grandfather and a box of gold and silver treasures.
I am a Phantom Spirit Master with only third-tier spiritual power.
Right now, I'm hiding in the Haitian Inn in Linhai City,
waiting for the one moving the pieces to arrive.
I... just want... to survive...
Everything is good except for being new.
Based on just four chapters released today, the author's dedication and sincerity are evident. It reminds me a bit of reading a board novel. In a genre dominated by wish-fulfillment novels, son-in-law/son-in-law stories, and system novels, this is a refreshing work. I wonder if the author has enough material to enrich the entire book. Go, go, go! (Shouting for you in Lin Mei-mei's voice 😘)
What a remarkable book!
I haven't been a fan long, and I've only read the latest 36 chapters so far, but I think this book is worth following. I hope the author maintains this level of writing quality and doesn't stop or abandon the story! 🤪 Let's talk about my impressions. From the Sea God Guards to the Qi Guards, and then to the Yuwen Imperial Palace, these three storylines each brought three different impressions. The Sea God Guards are somewhat like the "Night Watch," the Qi Guards are mysterious and powerful—definitely a storyline greatly exaggerated by the author—and the Yuwen Imperial Family has an outrageous amount of scandals... I get the feeling... Keep it up, Dada! Persistence will bring in more readers, hahaha Seriously, you didn't even bother to do any more work during the May Day holiday? Unbelievable...
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Haha, keep it up! As long as you persevere, you'll succeed one day. That's how online novels are; the more novel the plot, the more readers you'll get. Let's cheer each other on!
A work that deserves praise is either incredibly satisfying or absolutely exhilarating.
For a time, I loved the feeling of reading fast-paced, exciting novels, but after reading too many, they became less appealing. I stumbled upon this book by chance. The author's pacing isn't fast, but you can feel the author's sincerity in each chapter. Reading it once a week is more interesting than following along. Starting from around twenty chapters, the world the author has built begins to slowly unfold. You ask why not skip the first twenty chapters? Because they can't be omitted! Come on!
Leave a mark on yourself
This is actually my second novel. The ideas for this book were largely inspired by Game of Thrones. I borrowed its writing style and structure, and incorporated Eastern fantasy elements. I used adventure, power struggles, war, and emotions as the fulcrum to unfold the whole story. I spent about half a year developing the story's framework and even created a rough map myself 🤣 I've put a lot of effort into enriching this fictional world. I hope to present it to the readers with sincerity. I prefer stories with a plot rather than excessive wish-fulfillment elements. I hope to present a novel with a captivating and suspenseful plot, while also maintaining a lighthearted and humorous tone. I will downplay trendy elements such as face-slapping tropes. I hope to interact with readers in the days to come, and I welcome guidance from all the experts. 🤘 Recorded on April 5, 2021.
Good, very good
This book needs careful polishing. Don't rush the word count; instead, focus on developing each element to make the characters well-rounded and the story engaging. Keep it up! ⛽
The opening is well-written, using a series of indirect descriptions to reveal the story's background. It also leaves some suspense, which is very engaging. The synopsis is also excellent; the phrase "just wanting to survive" is very intriguing. The environmental descriptions are also very well controlled and effectively create atmosphere. The only drawback is that the paragraphs in the first two chapters are a bit too long, but the rest are fine.
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Good book, support!
Documenting a week's worth of creations
A week feels like it goes by quickly, but it goes by even faster when I'm writing the book. Since I've decided to write a book in the Game of Thrones genre, I will do my best to enrich the characters, family storylines, and world-building. I hope to gradually bring the story I've conceived in my mind to life, and I also hope that readers can feel the sincerity behind this book. The concept of martial arts appeared for the first time in "The Immortal Sea". I hope to change "high martial arts" to "low martial arts" so that readers can focus more on the development of the main plot and the subplots while experiencing the protagonist's advancement. Perhaps the beginning of this book isn't the most "enjoyable" to read, but I hope it will be another kind of enjoyable experience. Thank you to all the readers who recommended my book and sent me gifts! Your support is my motivation for writing. 😊