Floating Heaven Pearl

After reading more than ten chapters, I noticed that the first few chapters by the author are rather short, with some around 1500 words each! It's very well written and flows smoothly! I have two suggestions. You could use more descriptions of expressions and tone of voice instead of just words. For example, in one passage, the protagonist says, "I'm leaving," and the little girl replies, "Are you leaving? Where are you going? I'm so reluctant to let you go!" Expressing this verbally feels a bit weak. I think it would be better if the little girl, hiding behind the old man, suddenly gripped his robe tightly with her right hand, her right foot weakly pawing the ground, tears streaming down her face, and asked, "Brother Lin, where are you going? Are you leaving?" Wouldn't it be better to use more descriptive language? The second villain should be described in more detail to evoke hatred. He needs to defeat you, verbally and physically, to slander and oppress you, and even kill those around you – old men and children alike! Then, he should stage a comeback, slapping you in the face and wreaking havoc, providing delayed gratification! The more wicked the villain, the more satisfying his downfall! A simple "I killed him," or indirect description, isn't enough to make him hateful! Just a few crude words, but the author writes much better than me, with a very imaginative mind. Keep it up...

Collect it and savor it slowly!

I've finally found a good book, I'm going to read it!

The opening is grand, spanning tens of thousands of years. I look forward to seeing how the story unfolds. Keep up the good work, author!

Absolutely a big production (ºº) Thank you for your hard work!

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You're going to write millions of words? Keep it up!

Keep it up, bro! Let's become gods together!

If you watch it slowly, it will develop its own unique flavor.

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