The God of Men at the Foot of Mount Liujiao

As the Year of the Ox bids farewell, a new spring arrives across the land. May happiness accompany you, may health be with you, and may beauty and reunion be entrusted to you: The novel is a huge hit!

Please come back often, dear readers! 🙏 Xiao Liu bows to everyone 🙇

Seriously, it's terrible. The system-driven genre relies on fast pacing, and the system appears quickly too. The first chapter about Mercury was completely unnecessary. Not only that, you could have shortened the content of the second chapter. You could have quickly skipped over the original owner's situation and gotten straight to the point. Your writing style is quite good, but you lack experience. You should read more similar works. Also, the "Ding~ Host..." Message is the system's basic format. You're probably a beginner. These are just superficial issues. The real issues are your cultivation level and techniques. The system's content wasn't fully reflected in the three golden chapters. Since I'm so sincere, how about a reward? 😂

Here it comes! Is this an update that's so late?

WC, if you remove the last character from the protagonist's name, it becomes my name.

Keep it up! I've already read it, remember to add punctuation!

The author's writing is quite good. After reading three chapters, I realized it's a system novel. However, Mercury is almost identical to Earth, with clothing, professions, and even courtyard houses. If that's the case, why isn't it an alien story about someone who traveled to Earth? Keep it up!

I'm giving this little bottle a shout-out!

I hope you sign the contract soon and get more featured spots. No rush!

Pretty good, I wholeheartedly support it.