The myriad demons emerge, and blood stains the heavens.
A legend of the Demon Emperor has spread across this continent. He is a fiend who slaughtered countless living beings, a sovereign who reigns above the highest heavens.
But then the human demon slayers descended and turned the world upside down.
Countless ages later, demon slaying has become an ordinary occupation, and the Demon Emperor's legend has become a myth repeated by all.
“Foolish humans, only death can make you atone.”
Just as all fell silent, Ouyang Chun awakens an ancient talent, shatters the firmament, and vows to make up for the heavens.
“Your life will be ended by my hand.”
Yet he does not know that the friend closest to him has become one of the demons.
The fearsome Ghost Martial General, with his savage face and murderous eyes, was once a handsome young man.
“The story will not end here, and neither will the ten-thousand-year blood feud between humans and demons!”
Note: The prequel, The Demon Emperor's Tale, is also being serialized alongside Records of the Demon Slayers. See how the Demon Emperor defies fate.
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I don't know if what I said is offensive. If you think what I said is wrong, you don't have to listen. I got a little dizzy just reading the prologue because of its layout: The author must pay attention to paragraph breaks, absolutely, absolutely, absolutely! I'm saying it three times because it's so important. The author clearly didn't pay attention to paragraph breaks. They need to be mindful of the spacing between words of different sizes and the intervals between dialogues. If you're not careful, it can easily be overwhelming. That's my first suggestion. Please re-format it. The author basically wove together all the dialogue between the two characters in every chapter, which makes the reader feel tired and uncomfortable. For example, the dialogue in the beginning of the prologue can be divided into paragraphs starting from "The middle-aged man nodded and said," and it is necessary to divide it into paragraphs from there; there can be no ambiguity. Also, the sentence "The father replied" must be divided into paragraphs from there as well. The author should revise the dialogue in each chapter using my method. It is necessary to revise it so that each character finishes speaking and then moves to the next paragraph. Do not combine the dialogue of two characters together. Although this may seem like a lot of dialogue, it is extremely tiring and not worth the effort. Others just leave a casual comment, but I do something different. I point out all the author's shortcomings. Otherwise, many people would criticize you, hehehe. The author's writing is not bad. If each chapter were divided into paragraphs using my method, it would be even better. Keep it up, this book is sure to be a hit! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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The prequel to "The Demon Chaser," titled "The Demon Chaser: The Demon Emperor's Tale," has also begun updating. We hope everyone will give it their support.
Here are some suggestions for "Rebirth of the Supreme Being of the Human Realm".
First, the synopsis needs to be revised; it's not exciting at all. It needs some moving descriptions, just the right amount of detail, or it should immediately reveal the conflict in your book, or foreshadow the meaning of the title. Secondly, the layout has major problems and must be changed; the paragraphs are too long. Moreover, the word count in each chapter isn't actually that high; all I see are long paragraphs. I don't know if this is your style, but it's really uncomfortable, like a dragging, uncoordinated mess. Third, you need to draw clues, character clues, and foreshadowing. These should not be abrupt; some should be detailed, others should be brief. Fourth, try to avoid things you're not used to. If you're not used to portraying characters, use actions or plot to replace them. If you're not good at describing scenes, you can write from other aspects. Fifth, your fight scenes and plot development lack detail, which is somewhat fatal. Many fantasy dramas easily fall into the cliché of a rambling narrative; it needs to be changed, absolutely changed. Sixth, the problem...
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Nine meteors fell from the heavens, a mournful howl of wolves echoed, and the cold moon trembled. A colossal wave engulfed the imperial city, and flames raged across the land, shaking the eight wastelands. Nine layers of emerald-green jade feathers, radiant light filled the sky, encompassing the starry realm. A dragon roared to the heavens, its might shaking the five regions, a long sword pointed towards the firmament.
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This book is great!
Keep it up, the plot is really addictive!