The Villainous Crown Prince's Daily Life of Spoiling His Wife

I've saved it, I'll read it slowly, and I'll give it a thumbs up! Visiting with "The Awakening of the Green Lotus"!

I write martial arts novels, and I don't see anything wrong with your kind of writing. Keep it up, you've already written 300,000 words!

The introduction is too long, it needs to be more concise! The paragraphs shouldn't be too long either. Good luck, young man! Sending you two lucky bottles, wishing you double the good fortune.

The small bottle has been sent and received. Keep up the good work!

The author writes very well.

Thank you for your attention. The author's writing is great! The protagonist is exactly my type, and the language is beautiful. I will recommend it to others. Keep up the good work, author!

On the first floor, in the second chapter, the male protagonist likes a certain type of girl, but the answer later mistakenly wrote "she" instead of "he," haha. I've saved it and am waiting for a follow-up visit.

It's obviously a system novel. I'm not familiar with this genre and don't know much about it, but your synopsis is indeed a bit long. The writing style is decent, but the plot feels a bit flat.

The synopsis is a bit long; it would be better if it were more concise. As for the layout, some paragraphs are still too long. It would be even better if the author could shorten it and divide it into more sections. (Please visit my page! 😄)

I feel... There's nothing wrong with it. It's well-written, and the premise is novel. I'm a fantasy novel author, and I really can't see any problems with your work.