The Divine Artifact: The Great Emperor Returns
神器之大帝再现
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 71k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia & Wuxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
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31Chapters
3.2kClicks
38Favorites
68Recommendations
29Comments
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The writing style is good, and the details are handled quite well. It's a classic underdog-to-hero story, but this formula isn't as popular anymore because there are too many of them. You can bring in some innovative elements. For example, it could be combined with technology, where the protagonist masters some modern technology, builds cannons to attack mountain gates, or creates weapons to bombard powerful enemies. Of course, these are just personal opinions. The writing style is good and flows smoothly; getting a contract shouldn't be a big problem.
The author's writing is excellent.
Well… shouldn't a middle-aged man be described as handsome? Handsome is usually used to describe young girls or boys. A female reader's conflicted opinion… Would "refined" or "handsome" be better?
Nice!!
The world-building is excellent from the start, with a strong emotional background, compelling plot, and superb writing. Even knowing the ending of the prologue, I still felt compelled to keep reading! However, I have a small suggestion for the author: to further highlight the characters' personalities and build emotional tone in the prologue, perhaps more psychological descriptions—whether it's grand ambitions or a life of tragic end—could be used. This would leave the reader wanting more and pique their interest. Also, while the hero's tragic end is full of passion, constantly using "middle-aged man" feels a bit out of place. Try using a different adjective; it might be cooler! This is just a rough suggestion, I hope it helps.
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Although there are only five chapters so far, including the prologue, it's clear the author has put a lot of effort into it. The writing is excellent; keep it up!
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Your writing is excellent, keep it up!
As a newcomer, I've read your excellent work. It's a wonderful book, and I encourage you to keep up the good work! Keep writing your own story and support me!