Daytime Journey

I'm a complete beginner and really appreciate everyone's support. I know my writing isn't great, but I'll keep trying and I'm still learning... I'll take any feedback and improve accordingly. Thank you so much!

Let's support each other! You should check out mine too, "The Chronicles of Rahu, the Six Paths of True Gods"

I've read your work, it's really good! The writing is clear and fluent, and the emotions are expressed clearly. Keep it up, keep it up!

Support, keep it up! I suggest adding a sorting system for each chapter, such as Chapter 1, Chapter 2, or using chapter numbers, so it won't get mixed up later.

This is clearly the work of a master; the paragraphs are very clear, and the word count for each chapter is just right. Thumbs up!