Jasmine: City of Glimmers (Part One)

I've read Zhongyan's excellent work, "The Legend of Shennong Through My Desires," and found it to be a truly moving piece. I must sit here and follow along! Keep it up!

Okay, I've read them all, Li.

Time flows on like a river, never ceasing day or night. —The Analects, Zihan Chapter

So many words, incredibly fast, I admire you.

Seeking help for the prequel to Investiture of the Gods: Sincerity comes first, everything else second.

Good morning! I'm returning the visit. Keep up the good work, everyone!

I've unlocked ten chapters with sincerity. As a newcomer, I'd love to read them and hope you'll visit my page when you have time!

I came here after seeing your post. Your writing is quite good, but the first-person narration and names are a bit mixed up, making it a little confusing. It's alright, though, since first-person narration is really difficult to write. However, you started using third-person narration, so I suggest you avoid using multiple personas. Also, the word count for each chapter is too high, probably around three to four thousand words. I suggest you keep each chapter around two thousand words. Furthermore, most paragraphs are too long; please try to keep each paragraph under six lines, otherwise it will easily wear down the readers' patience. However, the content of the first chapter written by the author is quite good. The author is still very talented. However, it would be best if the writing could be more refined. After all, good writing comes from slow and steady progress. The author should keep at it! Keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง!

I'm a newbie online and need your support! Please give me some encouragement. My name is the same as the title of my novel. Thank you!