You Know Not When to Return

After looking at a few pictures, I completely gave up the idea of giving you advice. I just think there's a place on the second page of the first chapter where a word could be added (between the fingers).

Well, the concept is quite unique, but it's also very appealing and encouraging! The writing is also very delicate, effectively conveying the dialogue with Manjushri Bodhisattva. The characters' personalities and the scenes are vividly portrayed. Keep it up!

Here's a collection and some votes for you, keep it up!

The author's writing is really good, with conflict and tension that's quite captivating. However, I don't know why it only has less than 30 reads despite updating so many times. Author, please promote it more; this type of story is very popular on 17k. Keep it up! ❤️

The descriptions are so delicate, it has a beautiful writing style, like prose. I'll save this for later.

Your writing is really good; compared to most online novels these days, your descriptions are very detailed.

Good afternoon, the cover is quite beautiful. I read one chapter. The writing has a story-telling feel. But the vocabulary needs to be more refined. I'll add it to my favorites to show my support! Keep it up!

I was drawn in by the adorable cover, haha, it has such a lovely feel to it. The plot and descriptions are quite delicate, though the character development could be a bit more vivid and well-rounded. To give it an extra boost, I suggest revising the synopsis. If you're stuck, check out some similar stories with well-written synopses. Keep it up! Love you! ♡

Nice, there's still room for improvement, keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง

I checked out another book by the same author and it was pretty good, why did you abandon it? 🤣 But this one is still okay, I haven't had anything to read lately, I'll add this one to my reading list too 😂