If Only Life Were Like Our First Meeting: Years Like Flowing Water

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A cover would be even better! I've given away all my votes, so please show your support with a heart!

Here are my favorites and recommendation votes, keep up the good work!

I support this author! I've added it to my favorites; you're sure to become a hit! Beautiful writing!

Dear reader, as this is my first time writing a book, I'm always overwhelmed with emotion and have many thoughts to share. Therefore, I may have overlooked some writing rules, such as punctuation, structure, and the style and atmosphere of expression. I humbly welcome your suggestions and advice so I can improve with each writing session. These are just my personal opinions; your feedback is welcome. Interaction, mutual gifts, comments, and follow are all welcome. Hong En Mo

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This article has me completely confused! Why is there no dialogue between the characters? You need to pay attention to the segmentation!

There are indeed some punctuation issues (but my own punctuation problems are much worse, so I won't go into detail). The writing is very humorous; with more practice, maybe it can move into absurdist black humor literature. These metaphors are so strange, hahaha!

Your story is about university life, which coincides with my own upcoming university studies, so I'm really looking forward to your future works. Did you intend to use commas to indicate omission? I suggest revising that; it feels a bit abrupt. The chapter title about military training immediately conveys a somber mood, which might not be very engaging for readers. Perhaps you could revise it. I'm not very good at creating chapter titles either; maybe I could look at other authors' table of contents and try to come up with more appealing titles. Your writing is quite good; keep up the good work!