Life Is Like Our First Meeting: Why Lament Over a Painted Fan?

To be honest, the typo at the beginning slightly affected my viewing experience.

The opening is very engaging. Now that they've gone to the lower realm, it should trigger a series of events. Keep it up!

I've added it to my favorites. The author writes very well! The plot is captivating, and the main storyline is clear. Keep up the good work, author! The writing is smooth and engaging!

Good morning! I read the opening; the concept is quite imaginative, and the plot is rather interesting. The descriptions could use more detail. I'm adding it to my favorites! Keep it up!

I feel the same way as that expert regarding the topic. However, it's a matter of personal preference, so feel free to do as you please. I do feel a sense of "Why bother with past acquaintances when we've met before?"—This is just my personal reflection. The paragraphs are clear, the logic complex, and the meaning profound. I strive to learn from you! I'll definitely visit your page.

I think it's pretty good. The paragraphing, language, setting, and concept are all excellent. Just a little more attention could be paid to the use of quotation marks, and the plot could develop a bit faster. Keep it up!

Here I am again!

I think you could change the title. The poem loses its feeling when fewer words are used. I've saved it! Keep up the good work!

Ah, this setup seems to be about a max-level player venturing into the world. I think it's good, but the fact that he gets eliminated right after descending to the mortal realm and encounters two people of high status makes the plot unfold way too quickly. However, the good thing is the humor and witty banter, which are quite appealing.

It's well-written, and the plot is original. I hope you continue writing.