Don’t Compare Talents With Me

Don't hold back, everyone. Come on, you can insult me, I might not reply, but I'll definitely read it. /Trembling

I give up, my chapter has been locked twice now, accused of advertising... I'm truly sorry for any inconvenience caused. I'll talk to the editor when he gets back to work.

Although I don't read many sports novels, this one is pretty good. I've finished the first chapter, and the premise is quite good. I'll continue reading.

Haha, the protagonist is a top gangster who transmigrates into an athlete (basketball player), isn't that amazing? I really like this kind of story. I admit it resonated with me. And he's already 1.9 meters tall at 19?! He'll definitely be over 2 meters tall later on. As a short person, I'm incredibly envious!!!

Overall, as a lighthearted, boastful novel, it's alright. However, the beginning of the story involves a somewhat mindless time-travel element. Although the author keeps portraying Liu Hao as a top-tier fighter, his personality doesn't resemble that of a fighter at all; he's rather bland and unremarkable. Even when he starts showing off, he doesn't really stand out beyond his arrogance and self-confidence. While it's supposed to be a sports novel, it's not really about competition; it constantly talks about matches and acquiring equipment. Some people play basketball just to show off, and I suspect this book also has that element. As for being action-packed, it's not particularly exciting. The characters lack depth and are mostly just complaining about the system. The dean's character design is good. He and Fatty are the only two characters with distinct personalities. Novels shouldn't be all about winning. If you've read Slam Dunk, you should know that they all grow through failure. If the protagonist relies solely on the system, his body will become stronger, but his mind will weaken until he becomes vulnerable.

I just finished reading the first chapter, and here's a small suggestion: don't include real place names or people's names in the article. It's okay if you're not famous now, but once you become famous, a bunch of trolls will say you're insulting.

I'm begging for your support, please add this to your favorites, and vote for it!

So you're not going to write it anymore?

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