I'm Really Just a Rookie

The protagonist, Xiao Yilin, doesn't have an overly strong aura, but he's relatable, decisive, and quick-witted, with a high level of ability to distinguish right from wrong. The story gets straight to the point from the start, without excessive filler (very typical of *The Wind Rises*). The plot is fast-paced and captivating, with some interesting references interspersed throughout the slightly clichéd storyline, elevating the writing significantly. The opening effectively intensifies the conflict, perfectly showcasing the protagonist's strong sense of brotherhood. Thumbs up for this excellent work; I've already added it to my favorites.

This is a fantastical story set in a game-like world, and when I saw the phrase "five black squares" in the first chapter, I immediately wondered if the author would buff Xiao Yilin with equipment and skills from a mobile game. 😏😏 The first three chapters are excellent, with no filler and a perfectly executed opening conflict. Su Bailong, that bastard, definitely needs some serious development (he's a bit of a scoundrel like me!). Finally, to be honest, the only thing that bothered me was the word count – not enough for me! But then I thought, for a masterpiece, you can't rush it, so I'll just have to add it to my collection and savor it slowly. Onward to the courtyard house!! Go for it! ^0^

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