Picking Up the Years

This is my first time writing, I'm a newbie writer (๑>؂<๑). I hope you guys can give me some guidance, leave the book title, and let's visit and comment on each other's posts! ✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

Your writing is excellent, but could you please double-check if Lu Zixuan and Shen Zixuan in the first chapter are the same person? Are there any typos? Also, please pay attention to the punctuation in the part about buying alcohol. Keep it up!

It's very well written. I hope Nanran won't have any family trauma. I look forward to the development of the plot.

I think the author is a meticulous person. From the very first page, which establishes the entire quote, the characters' roles are already defined. As the story unfolds, each chapter reveals the author's purpose. I'm learning from you!

The author writes very well, looking forward to the next update.

I saw your comment on my post! So I came to comment! I've read part of your book, and I won't go into the praise, since it's truly well-written! Instead, I'll offer a suggestion! The first chapter, "Initial Encounter," is a bit short! You could make it longer! You could also leave some suspense for later chapters!

I've added this book to my bookshelf and added it to my favorites. Show your support! 😊

That's a bit too little, please increase the update frequency significantly!

Persistence is victory

Keep going, keep going, perseverance leads to victory!