Heart and Sword

I've added it to my bookshelf, and I look forward to your updates! (≧∇≦)/

Looking forward to the update!

I've loved martial arts elements since I was a child. However, there are very few traditional martial arts writers these days, and among the authors I've seen, you are quite outstanding. To write a good martial arts story, the most important thing is a broad perspective; your plot is a bit too narrow and doesn't quite capture the essence of the martial arts world. Your writing is good, and the characters are well-developed. The plot is slightly scattered, but overall it's very good. Keep it up!

Poisonous reviews can't offer much right now, for two reasons. 1. The word count is too low, so I can't give a good review (a common mistake for newbies, which I can understand). Second: I just started writing, and the plot isn't very clear. It doesn't give me a fresh feeling, so just write it according to your ideas. Recommendation: Read more books similar to your own style to find inspiration (borrowing, not copying! This is very important, remember!).

Very good! Keep it up!

The writing style and content are both good; I'll save it for later. A small suggestion: make the paragraphs more detailed, and add chapter titles.

When a person has weathered the most difficult time...

Desiring detailed depiction

Confess your feelings! (Let's cheer each other on!)

Zhongyan has arrived, along with fellow writers. After reading the synopsis, I see it's a short, readable book. I'm eager to follow along as he vividly portrays desire and emotion. Keep it up!