The Dry Well Curse: Final Chapter

First, there are too many long paragraphs. If that's not the case, a contract is unlikely. Then comes the use of words, such as "a huge living room". Furthermore, the author fails to create atmosphere, and the detailed descriptions the author includes are completely useless; what's the point of writing about the echo of a scream? My advice to the author is to read more online novels, especially supernatural ones, reading them word by word.

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Dear author, I've read your post and would like to offer some suggestions. First of all, segmentation is very important. I only looked at the first page; it was too dense. It would be better to keep it to around 5 lines at most. In some parts of a sentence, adding commas to separate the parts makes the meaning easier to understand. The formatting of the main text is very important; remember to divide it into paragraphs, paragraphs, paragraphs. Otherwise, most people would be discouraged from reading it. Keep it up! Hope you'll visit and leave a comment. Keep it up! (☆^ー^☆)

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