The Celebrity's Monster Assistant

After quickly reading seven or eight chapters, it's clear that this is a writer with considerable skill. For someone who can produce such a work, so-called writing techniques are at best just icing on the cake. Okay, let's start with the details. At first, I read too quickly and didn't quite understand. I had to reread it before I finally grasped it. First of all, the story's background is quite extensive. There are ghosts, humans, and an afterlife. What abilities does the female protagonist have? Hmm. Teleportation, seeing ghosts, and reincarnation. You could say each ability forms a separate plotline. This kind of subject matter is indeed very novel, but you have to understand the consequences of expanding the world view and developing a large number of plot lines. This is a dance on the edge of a knife. A good writer reaches the pinnacle of life; a bad writer fades into obscurity. The unfolding of emotions reveals numerous possibilities. This means that every plot point must be perfectly logical. There's absolutely no room for error in this; otherwise, it can easily lead to disagreements with the readers. Without readers, you're just playing with yourself. Therefore, I suggest that articles should be written by brainstorming, and the author and other readers should work together to develop the plot. This well-written work is quite successful. The book's greatest feature is its character descriptions, which reveal the distinct characteristics of each character through just a few sentences. The heroine endured countless teleportations, countless reincarnations, and countless ghosts that came one after another. The male protagonist's cold-bloodedness is easily seen in his sarcastic remarks to the female assistant and in the recruitment of the 18th assistant. That person's loneliness and desolation. From the very beginning of the story, she constantly sought to have fun with the female protagonist. In essence, after being a ghost for so many years, she was also a lonely person. Okay, that's all for now. Good luck to you. Bye! If you think my comment is helpful, please recommend me to other big-name users. And if you could also give my book a boost, that would be even better.

Chapter 1 begins by mentioning the female protagonist's special abilities, which are different from ordinary people, thus piquing the reader's interest to continue reading. In Chapter 2, the male protagonist appears, and his conversation with his female assistant highlights his personality. Chapter 3: What I remember most vividly is the cat. I found it a little scary, probably because I read a horror novel in elementary school called "The Cat Whisperer" d(ŐдŐ๑). Chapter 6 depicts the first formal encounter and interaction between the male and female protagonists, and it's written in a very interesting and vivid way. The author's writing is quite good, but each piece could be a bit longer ╮(￣▽￣)╭ and a cover could also be added. Great book! Don't miss it! (›´ω`‹) —From a newbie author, please be kind in your comments.

"Monster Assistant" isn't Xiaoxi's first book. She's had several other books published on other platforms, including the campus romance "Qiao Zui Can Wei Guang," the celebrity fantasy "TFBOYS: I Only Want to Cherish You," the historical romance "Mei Tong Nu Zun Huo Luan Tian Xia," and the youthful heartbreak "Liang Qiu Ping Ta Nuan." If you find any of these appealing, feel free to check them out! Alternatively, you can search for "Pu Xiaoxi" directly; her Weibo name is also her pen name!

As the title says, I applied for a contract twice and was rejected both times. But I'm shameless, so I'll keep applying. Maybe I'll get accepted when even the editors get tired of me, haha. Friends, feel free to recommend books in the comments section of this post. Let's help each other and improve together. I'll reply to every comment.

It's so well written, I can't help but want to read more.

I'm dying of laughter!!! Hahaha!!! Author, please update soon!!! The beginning is so sweet, but the ending won't be so heartbreaking, right?! I'm crying!

Your writing is excellent, the content is original and captivating. Keep it up! ↖(^ω^)↗

Cough cough cough, I'm dying of laughter! That line in the article, "She'll eventually drink up her boss's luck like coffee..." The author has such a wild imagination, hahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia The synopsis is already a bit sad; she's never drunk the Meng Po soup (the soup of oblivion). Is this a blessing or a punishment? Only the female protagonist herself knows.

The theme is introduced quickly, and the plot flows smoothly without any filler. The story is actually quite readable, but I suggest maintaining a more relaxed pace. A too-fast pace can lead to reading fatigue, as the scenes change before the characters are fully formed. Pay more attention to the details of the characters' expressions and psychology. Otherwise, it's very good, and the subject matter is excellent. It's a great story! Keep it up!

The story opens without any unnecessary details, immediately making me eager to know what happens next with Lin Xing—that's great! The necessary detailed scene descriptions are all done well, but even after reading six chapters, I still don't have a clear impression of Lin Xing's appearance. If the author could perfect this aspect, it would be truly amazing! I've already added it to my favorites and look forward to the rest of Lin Xing's story!