At the End of the Flower-Filled Alley

I'm giving a long review now! I saw your post on the cover! Ding Meng and Song Qingyuan's romance in this story is so sweet, I'm so envious! Oh wow wow wow, something definitely happened in the first chapter, "Scattered Clothes"~ (automatically inserting random thoughts). I feel like the female lead has a tough, assertive personality, and her initiative in pursuing Song Qingyuan was quite unexpected. She's definitely a tough, assertive woman, haha~ Please don't make it too angsty, author! Just let Ding Meng and Song Qingyuan be happy together~ Yuan Ming's sudden appearance will definitely bring some trouble to Ding Meng, such as the name issue, the relationship problems between the two, etc. Sigh, speaking of which, why did Ding Meng even need a boyfriend? It's all because of Song Qingyuan! I'm really looking forward to seeing how Ding Meng resolves it later! This story is truly refreshing, very realistic. (Whispering: There are many typos in the text...) Author, please update quickly, I really want to see the later plot!!!

I took a look, and the article is very well written. The writing style is smooth and natural, and the female lead's character setting is also good. Your readership must be quite high... Ding Meng's reluctance to inherit the family business is similar to my female lead, but the intentions are different. My female lead has her own life plan and wants to fight crime and protect the people. I think your female lead's reason for not wanting to inherit the family business is a bit weak. After all, many people actually dream of being a lazy bum. Another small suggestion: adding a colon (":") when characters speak makes it easier to read; colons are generally used for dialogue in writing. Aside from this, which I find a little odd, everything else is perfectly fine. (I'm quite particular about small details, hahaha) Just keep writing patiently! Keep it up, author! Just focus on finishing your work and don't worry too much about the results. There will always be readers who like your style.

Let's take a look at Shunzi, check in slowly and carefully from the beginning to see the highlights, it looks...

Long time no see! I'm here to read books and meet fellow writers!

I'm on holiday reading and popping in to check on fellow writers. Lots of stories to tell, and I eagerly await your heartfelt work. Keep it up!

After finishing this classic book, sit here, read on, and reflect on it! Thumbs up!

A new book is starting, looking forward to working hard together!

It's finished! Hooray!

That's true. Work is more important; writing can be a hobby. (๑`･ᴗ･´๑)

It's over. I'm so lonely, but goodbye!