War God, Chase Me More Slowly

This is so touching! Keep it up!

I haven't read much, but I have a few suggestions. The first chapter doesn't really get into the plot; it's mostly flashbacks, which is a no-no in online novels. There are also occasional omniscient perspectives, which need to be considered. Of course, the author's skill in environmental description is good, but the length of the passages needs to be adjusted.

In those years, she was caught in a cycle of love and hate, giving everything but ultimately gaining nothing. Having cast aside the past, who awaits her in the future? Who will offer her warmth?

It's a new week, when will you update?

The name is quite interesting, I'll give it a thumbs up.

I sense a lot of potential in him, let's learn together. They came to visit, bringing books with them. Feel free to comment and let's exchange ideas.

The writing is delicate and the plot is captivating. Let's keep it up!

It's here! The writing is really good, the descriptions are very vivid. Looking forward to the next update!!!

The author's writing is excellent, and the story is clearly structured.

The details are well-written, and the background is quite grand. Keep up the good work with updates! Welcome to visit my page again.