Peace and Roses: Evacuation Operation

Firstly, the Type 88B uses a 105mm gun, while the 125mm gun was only introduced with the Type 88C, also known as the Type 96. Furthermore, the Type 88 lacks an automatic loader; why would a 105mm gun need an automatic loader when manual loading is faster? Additionally, the newer export version of the Type 59 uses a 105mm rifled gun, the British L7, which can easily engage the Type 88B. Furthermore, the fourth-generation naval aircraft is neither the J-20 nor the FC-31. The FC-31 doesn't even have official registration with the Air Force. The fourth-generation naval aircraft will only be a newly designed model adapted to carrier-based requirements. It is hoped that the author will be more rigorous in researching materials and create better works.

First of all, I want to express my love for your profile picture, it's so cute, hahaha! There's also a character named "Rabbit" in my story, what a coincidence! 😘 Then came the author's introduction, which surprised me a bit because the protagonist was described as quite immature, still very young. This was quite unusual, as many military novels nowadays feature mature and experienced protagonists. So, it really broke my heart to see her so young 😭😭😭 It reminded me of Miyazaki's *Grave of the Fireflies*. I sincerely wish for a world without war. I have a small suggestion: I think the paragraphs are a bit too long, and they're a little tiring to read. Could you perhaps break them down a bit? But since you're such a pro, it feels a little strange for me to give you feedback, haha, because I'm just a newbie myself \(//∇//)\ Okay, there aren't many people writing this kind of story anymore. The author must genuinely hope for world peace. So touching! Keep it up, author, I believe in you! 👍 Finally, I sincerely wish you continued success in your writing, and please come and take a look at my little memories and give me some valuable feedback 😊

It's indeed a very long novel, highly readable. I've been recommended this book by others for a long time, and I finally had the opportunity to finish it this year. There are many characters in the book, but as I read chapter by chapter, it felt like I was accompanying the characters through war, love, death, and other moments similar to those in real life.

I suppose you've already signed a contract? I get nervous just leaving a comment on these kinds of articles, firstly because I lack the ability and knowledge, and secondly because they're quite difficult to read. But I've read your first three chapters, and aside from everything else, the chapters are well-written and have plenty of words. I wish you success and that your writing continues to improve. Keep it up!

Sigh, Tang's gone. Looks like you'll be getting all my tickets... QWQ

Oh ho ho, it's about smoking. That shows some descriptive skill that I'm somewhat satisfied with. I suggest increasing the descriptive power! GKD

It's been a while since I wrote a long review, so I'll start here. Current progress: Chapter 5, Section 2. I've given this some thought, considering comments and other avenues. This is the story of a group of Chinese female soldiers who, after venturing into the smoke of battle, have been tempered into seasoned veterans. Portraying such a group of girls is one of the difficulties in writing this piece. I thought about it over and over again last night and found the part that wasn't quite right. Ah, it's a description of the female form. It clashes so directly with the serious historical context, constantly pulling me out of the story. To confirm if it's truly like that, I thought about it all night. Judging from the scene in the first chapter where the protagonist attempts suicide with a gun and the post-war narrative interspersed throughout, the tone of the article is serious. Writing poetry is similar; you need to maintain a consistent emotional tone and carefully consider the wording. I should probably reconsider words like "long, slender legs." Looking at these 151 unread chapters now, I guess I'll just have to read them slowly... I know nothing about the subsequent plot. From a traditional perspective, written language expresses what the author thinks and what they want us to see, but it doesn't mean saying whatever comes to mind. Those "long legs" seem a bit off-putting to me… I haven't watched much of the show, so I won't comment on the plot. This is just my rambling thoughts as a newbie (ฅ( ̳• ◡ • ̳)ฅ) A word-for-word, subtle, and somewhat restrictive approach, reminiscent of Redology, can make the text more readable. I think this approach is effective in portraying a complex personality—a veteran and an ordinary woman. The distinct personalities of the 108 heroes of *Water Margin* are not limited to positive descriptions; appropriate negative experiences can prevent character homogenization. The characters' exceptional wisdom, cunning, and righteousness in the novel are, after all, fiction and can be exaggerated to a certain extent (but reality is sometimes more fantastical). Xiao Lin, Xiao Lin, will you put down your gun and pick dandelions, or pick them while still holding your gun...?

I'm sorry for always being late. — "The Author's Disqualification" PS:(233)

Since so many people have already mentioned it, I won't go into the author's shortcomings. What's worth mentioning is that the author's plot is exceptionally well-developed, the dialogue is equally excellent, and the writing style is also quite good. It's evident that the author has a rich vocabulary. However, I personally feel that the character development is somewhat lacking. Having read the first few chapters, I haven't yet developed a strong impression of the characters. Overall, the author writes very well, and I've added it to my favorites.

Like a helpless parent, I stood anxiously at the school gate, my heart filled with nothing but the hope that familiar figure would appear. Time seemed to freeze at that moment; every second was agonizing...