Leisurely Days

After reading your book, I'm truly amazed! The characters are depicted so vividly, it feels like they're real little figures appearing right before my eyes—it's truly incredible! This is one of your strengths! I hope you continue to do so! I also want to learn a lot from you! I look forward to your comments and feedback on my book!

The beginning of your story has a Western feel, with a lot of inner monologues. While the later plot isn't very detailed, it's still engaging, and the character development is good. The unexpected shift in perspective further on was quite surprising. This is the first time I've seen this style of writing. I hope you stick to your style! Keep it up!

The multi-angle perspective is quite comfortable to watch, I like it 😁

I've come to read the story! The author's writing is fantastic! 👍

I've fallen in love with Lu Youran, and nothing could stop me. Although she may seem somewhat arrogant and aloof, that's just an appearance. She needs to project a strong image to protect herself; she needs to excel in everything to obtain what she truly desires. She knows better what she wants, what she can do, and what she needs. She is willing to give up all the accessories. This shows her decisiveness and perseverance. Lu Youran seems to be just like those people around us who are clearly very talented but still work incredibly hard. They may be a bit obsessive, but they rarely need help. Besides, so what if they're stubborn? So what if they're arrogant? At least they have the right to be. Whatever you have, work hard first. (The last sentence was said to myself, please don't misunderstand 😂)

It's well-written, with vivid and lifelike character portrayals. Although there's still a lot of room for improvement, it feels very real, clearly showing the author's genuine feelings and dedication. It left a deep impression on me. The most unforgettable times for each of us are often our youth; in fact, the things that influence us most deeply are often the most unforgettable. Everyone has a different experience of youth, and the people and events of our early years often have the deepest impact on our future. Whether it's the lonely boy in the book or the girl he met later, both were changed by certain experiences. The youth we cherish isn't just about that bygone era, but more about the people and events we encountered during that time. The future may not be what we initially envisioned, but those memories will remain, bearing the imprint of their presence. Keep it up! I have a lot to say.

I'd like to ask the author, is this a short story? The initial immersion was quite good. The paragraphs are a bit too long overall; they would be better if they were divided into smaller segments. The handling of symbols is somewhat inappropriate. Dear author, you can take a look back when you have time. (Please visit my page!)

The author writes very well! But why are there only 18 chapters out of 24? I asked as a reader.

Wow, that's a really short introduction! I've saved it for later!

The first-person perspective is great; the simple narrative style with a touch of playfulness is quite immersive. Moreover, the author cleverly uses details and environmental descriptions to reduce the frequency of the word "I," preventing the reader from being distracted. It's a great piece of writing, and I highly recommend it!