Hero's Iron

I glanced at the beginning and the introduction was a bit too rough. I suggest you adjust the names of the two robots. I think you were trying to imitate the Maximal and Megatron, but the names are indeed not very good. Also, you need to reconsider the description of the main story and the choice of words. The beginning feels repetitive, repeating the same things over and over again. But you've already written so many words, your perseverance is truly admirable. Just finish this book first.

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[Hero's Iron] made it to the 17K male fan page. Keep it up and keep working hard.

Just arrived, bro? Let me just say, after reading a few chapters, I feel your writing is a bit scattered. The most obvious example is that I couldn't even figure out who the main character was in the first three chapters. Also, you seem to be using a kind of off-screen monologue style, which is quite uncommon and I don't think it's suitable for online novels… That's all. Please don't be too harsh if you don't like it, and feel free to visit my page.

With continuous effort and revisions, it will surely become a good book. Keep up the good work, I support you! Let's support and exchange ideas.

The author writes well; I've brought the book with me!

Go go go!

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Look, "Golden Stick Invincible" is very well written, and it's much more popular than this old book.

If it goes well... I'll take another look.