That's How It Begins

Hey everyone! I'm here! 😃😃 First, let's look at the title and synopsis. The title is fine, quite novel, but the synopsis is a bit vague: Is this a coming-of-age story about a strangely confident teenager? Or a coming-of-age story? Or perhaps a comedic campus story? I'm a little confused about this, and I hope the author can revise it in the future. 🤓🤓 Then there's the content. The opening was basically fine, especially the bathhouse scene; it made me grin like crazy, almost touching the sun! 😂 However, your punctuation seems to have some issues. Are you typing on a computer? Because your ellipses are almost all separated by commas, which is typical of computer typing. 🤓🤓 Also, author, your chapters are really short. I'm on chapter six now, but the page count is still less than 10 pages. This means each chapter is less than 2,000 words, while the minimum is usually over 2,000. I suggest you increase the word count by adding more detailed descriptions and psychological descriptions. 🤗🤗

The author's synopsis got me so excited! The content is great too. Overall: I love it! I wanted to give away tickets, but they're all gone, sob sob ×_×

Fellow Daoist, I hope you'll visit my page and add it to your favorites. Let's work together and wish your work gets better and better.

I'm here! May you achieve godhood and ascend to heaven, sir!

In my opinion, at the very beginning of a novel, there will always be some trace of the author himself. It's very brave of you to speak out and say that this is your own story (I've never had the courage to openly tell everyone which parts of my story are my own). Everyone has their own stage in their heart, but when they will step onto it is hard to say. I really enjoyed your story, keep up the good work! 😉

Literature is the study of humanity, narrative and character portrayal, spatial arrangement, also known as visual imagery, and the weight of the strokes. After 300,000 words, have you noticed that the scenes and characters you've depicted are rather vague?

I'm here to support you! Keep it up, author! O(≧▽≦)O

It's quite pretty, I like it.

He's here! He's here! Keep it up, master! It's so novel!

I really enjoyed reading your writing; it felt so relatable and lifelike. After reading the preface, I realized it was a first-person narrative, which made it very comfortable to read and easy to immerse myself in the story. That part about being so nervous and hesitant to sign up, then regretting it afterwards—it's exactly like me! 😂 If I had to offer a suggestion, I think the consecutive use of punctuation marks in some parts of the text looks a bit odd, but that might just be my personal feeling. Overall, I still really like it 🤓 Wishing you smooth writing and all the best! 😃