Supreme Hongmeng

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Each chapter is short, and what are those question marks in the second chapter? One paragraph per page makes it very difficult to read.

I read the first chapter First problem: There are just too many words in each paragraph, it's so hard to break them up! The second question: The first page changed "entering the site" to "entering the factory". The third question: To be frank, this is at an elementary school level. You need to practice more. Your descriptions of the characters are so disjointed and incomprehensible, it's like a primary school student's composition. These are just my humble opinions; please refrain from criticism if you disagree.

Shall we take a look at each other?

This is my first time writing fantasy, so please be kind to me.

Supporting this excellent work, "The Ultimate Primordial Chaos" is truly well-written. Keep it up, I'm giving it my support!

Keep it up, everyone!

Keep up the good work!