Record of Seeking the Heart in the Nine Heavens

Doesn't it feel awkward to combine fantasy and history? The sense of social discontent is too strong.

The first few chapters were really awkward.

The young author, with his engaging stories "The Longevity Queen of Loulan" and "The Legend of Shennong Through Desire," finished reading this classic masterpiece and praised it.

As a newcomer, I come to pay homage to my seniors and would also like to ask for their guidance on the author's work, "Zi Fei Xian".

I've saved this; I'll read it later.

Chapters 749 and 748 are duplicates, and the quality is getting worse and worse.

I've come across a good book; I'll study it a bit.

Boss, I'd like to offer a few suggestions: 1. Volume 3, "The World of Mortals is Like Fire," is too long compared to the first two volumes. It could be divided into several volumes, such as a separate volume for the return to Chang'an or the search for the Book of Time in the Northern Underworld. This would also make the content more organized. 2. I feel there are too many characters appearing one after another, which is probably necessary for the plot. However, this also results in many characters appearing before but never returning. The most obvious example is Shangguan Wu, who had a high screen time in the early stages but disappeared later. Another example is Yun Chuchen, who initially seemed like the second male lead, but in reality, he was just a minor character with no distinct personality traits. The extensive setup in the first chapter felt pointless. 3. Too many fight scenes. Of course, this isn't to say that fight scenes are unnecessary—after all, they're part of the essence—but the descriptions of fight scenes feel excessive.

Hey bro, what I wanted to say was that your paragraphs are too long and tiring to read. Could you please break them into more paragraphs to consider the readers' needs? Thanks!!

I've read it! Keep up the good work, and I wish you become a god soon!