Knowing the Way

Keep up the good work with your brother's selected novels!

Zixuan is visiting! Let's support each other and keep going!

Aren't you going to rewrite it?

How did it end?

Stopping now is even worse; keep trying.

May my friend return soon; perseverance is victory.

Let me add something! One area I felt was lacking was the description of the inn in Chapter 16. While the author described the inn's signboard as dilapidated, they didn't describe other parts of the inn to emphasize its state. I think the inn's dilapidated state should have been depicted from other angles. For example, the originally vermilion beams and pillars inside the inn had long since turned dark red, and traces of moss were even visible on the peeling red paint on the pillars. A series of descriptions like these would have made the inn's dilapidated state more apparent. (Multiple perspectives are needed to make the reader feel that the inn is truly run-down; otherwise, it might make the reader think the author is inept at writing detailed storytelling.)

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After you finish your Level 2 Construction Engineer exam, keep up the good work. I'm in a similar situation; I applied for Fire Protection, which is really tough. I don't have time to study right now, but luckily my exam is in November!

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