The Legend of the Nine Ancient Swords

Well written, keep it up!

In elementary school, all I knew how to do was grab the fence.

First-person perspective?

Elementary school? Wow! My first traditional martial arts novel was also conceived in elementary school, but I wrote it during my transition from elementary to middle school! I support you!

Here are some big red flowers for you, good luck! Mwah!

Even elementary school students write so well! I'm ashamed of myself. I'll learn from you. Keep it up! ↖(^ω^)↗

Good job! Keep it up!

Nothing is impossible; perseverance is a virtue and an attitude. Wishing you, my child, a brilliant writing journey!

Both are twelve years old, but they can't keep writing and they support the author.

The shortcoming is that each chapter is too short; I suggest adjusting it to around 2,000 to 3,000 words per chapter. Of course, 1,000 words per chapter would also be acceptable.