A Gathering of Peerless Heroes

I read from chapter 11 to chapter 40 in one go, and here are my brief thoughts. Please forgive me if they're not very good! Su Aotian's cultivation process is explained too vaguely. I didn't quite understand the different levels of Qi Refining, perhaps because I haven't read many cultivation novels. Also, I felt the book's introduction was too simplistic, the theme wasn't novel enough, resulting in fewer readers, and there weren't many suspenseful moments (plot holes). The protagonist didn't have any particularly powerful cheat abilities, and the fight scenes weren't very exciting. The book is mostly dialogue, and too much irrelevant dialogue can lead to reader fatigue. The lack of physical and emotional descriptions makes it difficult to form a clear impression of the characters, such as their hairstyles, clothing, etc. The auction scene was also a bit drawn out; what could have been a one-chapter story was stretched into four or five chapters. Perhaps this was for the author's plot purposes, but I felt it was just about dialogue, too bland and not exciting enough!

I've come to read your book again. Best wishes.

Wild Grass's books are different from other cultivation novels; they have distinct characteristics and are generally quite good.

Good evening, Suzaku!

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Volume 20, Chapter 20 ~ (￣▽￣~)~

Good evening, Suzaku! Keep it up!