Reborn: All-Around Entertainment

After reading about twenty chapters, I feel the author's pacing isn't very good. The pace in the early chapters shouldn't be too fast. The transitions between the competition, the live singing, and the signing of contracts are too uneventful. A good "cool" novel must focus on satisfying moments and well-developed plot. The writing should be as nuanced as possible. Also, the protagonist's life is too smooth; without a sense of urgency, there won't be any satisfying moments. Therefore, more attention should be paid to the plot. The pacing should ideally be controlled to create a powerful, impactful climax. For example, a chapter or half a chapter could have a slightly drawn-out introduction focusing on the characters, or emphasize character development through dialogue. This approach would be more suitable and allow for more room for development. Otherwise, a fast pace will become a hindrance. Well, that's all for now. This is just a suggestion. Also, the cover is terrible; you should find someone to change it. It makes me lose all desire to read it. = = Author, keep it up! Don't abandon this story! ==@Elementary SchoolStudent

The author's ideas are quite good, but their control over the plot and writing style is clearly insufficient. Some plot points, such as how a short story told during a live stream can attract hundreds of viewers, are obviously illogical. The writing style is also somewhat awkward. It is recommended that the author work harder on these aspects.

Dear author, it's been two months since your last update, please don't abandon this project!

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My new book, "Super Coaching," has come to visit. I hope your achievements continue to improve!

A new author and author of "Super Coaching" are here to visit. Wishing you continued success!

Is this a eunuch?

What the heck was that ending?

What the heck was that ending?

The author of "Infinite Immortal Destiny" visited and sent flowers to show their support. They wish the author continued success and that the book sells like hotcakes. Also, taking this opportunity to advertise, the author's work has already reached 4 million words; all interested readers are welcome to subscribe and support it.