Heavenly War Venerable

I just saw a friend's comment and suggestion, which were very pertinent and reasonable. Thank you very much! This poem certainly cannot compare with the well-known ancient poems, but I don't think deleting this chapter is a good thing. Admittedly, it would make it more enjoyable for those who understand poetry, but what I want to say is that we are not Du Fu or Li Bai, and we cannot write poems that will be passed down through the ages. What we write is online novels, not traditional literature. What we seek is not great talent, but a wonderful story that can bring readers enjoyment. Many platinum-level works can immerse countless readers and have a profound influence, but if you take the words and phrases out of their works, they are not actually that amazing. In fact, they can be said to be composed of very ordinary vernacular. But we can still feel the brilliance of their works. As for the rules of meter and rhyme, how can those modern poems by the masters be called poems? Similarly, the reason I dedicated a separate chapter to this poem isn't because it's exceptionally beautiful enough to be compared to ancient poems. Thanking a friend for the poem is only a small part of the reason; that would have been sufficient in the comments section. What I value more is its poetic essence. I feel it fits the style of this book, expressing an ineffable atmosphere, so I felt it necessary to include it in the book's related sections, rather than for meaningless boasting. Readers who like this poem are welcome to appreciate it together; those who don't can ignore it or offer criticism. I believe the friend who wrote the poem will generously accept feedback and continue to improve. If you believe you have exceptional literary talent, feel free to showcase it; I will appreciate it all and include it in the book's related sections for everyone to critique. In ancient times, there were countless schools of thought; where are our contemporary thinkers? Instead of being overly critical, let's discuss and improve together. Perhaps one day, we too can produce masterpieces no less powerful than those of the legendary poets, wouldn't that be a blessing for China?

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