The Immortal Path Endures Forever

Question 1: The writing style needs improvement. Question 2: The whole article feels disorganized, probably because it lacks an outline. Question 3: Improve your literary knowledge and study more. Question 4: Things that shouldn't be written should be mentioned only briefly; the level of detail should be appropriate. This is Xiaobing's opinion; I hope you will consider it.

Can you please stop acting like a pig? The beginning seemed fine, but then you turned out to be such a lecherous idiot.

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Keep it up, author! 💪

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The article is special, and the title is even more special 😄😄😄

Farming unfamiliar land is worse than leaving it fallow; raising an unworthy child is worse than having none at all. (From *The Qilin Sword*)

I'm back again!

The cycle of reincarnation, a sigh for this fleeting world, who truly reigns supreme? Seeking immortality, asking the gods, but it's all just a slip of the foot. I've come to visit with "I Have a Shot, Tianyi"!

"[[Wilderness Dragon Scales ♞ Chinese Inscriptions ♞ Song Dynasty · *Xiangxi Zimingtang Moxibustion Classic*]]"