Online Gaming: A Peerless Strike

It's all written in a mess.

I've saved this; here's a click for an ad. "The Age of Space Exploration" tells you about the origins of humankind! "The Great Cosmic Development Era" establishes a technology tree for cultivation and uses science fiction to explain fantasy! Why has the cultivation of immortality in China gradually declined? What role has the cultivation community played in world history? What is the essence of the Renaissance? Where did humankind originate? What was the world like before the Big Bang? "The Age of Space Exploration" will reveal all! Until he becomes the overlord of the stars and the sea, he will eventually wage war and explore parallel universes. It is clearly a technological product of a space-based individual combat system, yet it has been given the name of cultivation by ignorant people! It is clearly a space-based individual escape pod, yet the ignorant have given it the name of a Nascent Soul! This is [book=Cosmic Development Era:69327]

The Great Path of Cultivation Visits

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Your writing is fluent and your thoughts are clear; it is truly a rare gem. I have already added it to my bookshelf. I hope you will continue your efforts and reach new heights. I look forward to your visit with "Inevitable Reincarnation," and ask for your return visit, guidance, praise, and collection.

"Treading the Sky" is here! (*^__^*) Hehe

Why do authors always seem to throw in unnecessary details and fill their books with minor characters? It's so annoying to read. The protagonist's development later on is disjointed and disjointed. What game limits player levels? Why wait until level 60?!

I have to criticize the author again. How can they even make money from such a terrible novel? And those "Seven Gods of the Online Game" characters are complete idiots. No matter how good their skills are, how can they get good equipment if they miss the opportunity? They even claim that joining the game a month and a half later will allow them to catch up and reach level 60 first, with such amazing equipment. Do they really think this game is some kind of fantasy novel? Good skills only mean you're more efficient at killing monsters, but they don't give you an immediate advantage. Also, special equipment for those with hidden identities does exist, but it's rare. It's not like being a better player guarantees you'll get it; it's all about luck. This kind of equipment is usually a unique reward from a quest and doesn't drop often. Clearly, the author wrote about these "Seven Gods of the Online Game" having such equipment...

Ugh, speechless. I've read up to chapter 166. Can't you at least write something serious? Even if you don't, and it's just a... "... I won't say anything, but you used random words to describe that dialogue from the Three Kingdoms period. Could you be any worse? You're writing a novel, not some side note! If this were a paid novel, you'd be cursed by the whole world! That dialogue is absolute garbage. If it were paid for, nobody would pay a cent!

That "Radiant Belt" is ridiculous! Infinitely many holes?! How big is that belt anyway? And why is it a level 40 item from the starting village, with no level limit?! This game is supposed to be realistic, but with that belt having infinite holes, I wonder if ancient belts were infinitely large?!