Legend of the Heart-Slaying Divine Saber

La la la, Xiao Ye is back with "Like a Dream, Prosperous as a Mask" and "The Sunny God's Soft and Cute Little White Rabbit"! Your writing is great, the style is fantastic, and your popularity is so high, it's enviable! You don't seem like a newbie at all. Unlike me, who struggled to write 80,000 words before realizing how bad the beginning was when signing the contract, so I resolutely created a new account to slowly revise my work. Okay, back to the point. I've read a few chapters, and the writing is quite good, but there seems to be a lack of dialogue. I haven't written or read many ancient-style novels, so I don't know if ancient-style novels usually have little dialogue. You could add some dialogue, or set up some foreshadowing and suspense to attract readers. Okay, that's all for now. That was a bit too formal at first... I hope you keep up the good work! I've added this book to my collection. I'm with you! Please remember to visit me often! Hugs! QAQ @A Generation of Heroes

This is really well written; I'm looking forward to the next installment.

"Ultimate God of Magic" is here to return the visit! I read over ten chapters in one go, so let me give Junjun a long review! Actually, this type of classical work seems to have reached its peak; further innovation wouldn't yield much new. However, within the Xianxia genre, to stand out, one needs not only exquisite and delicate writing but also a grand, ancient style. Picturesque scenery and poetic characters allow readers to see a magnificent and grand world… Also, the world-building could be expanded further; consulting more ancient texts would be very helpful for writing. Junjun's choice to blend classical literature with Xianxia is, in my opinion, particularly excellent. I personally lean towards the literary and ancient styles, and I have a certain inexplicable affection for classical poetry. So, while I don't know what you all think, I still feel it's quite well written! In short, I'm very envious of Junjun's booming popularity, and I hope Junjun won't let down all the support he has received! Keep working on the plot, and your writing can further evolve and improve! For capturing the essence of the story, I suggest drawing inspiration from some Xianxia games, such as the Legend of Sword and Fairy (it's a classic!). At the same time, I hope Brother Junjun can innovate. Although we've explored every aspect of Xianxia, the human condition is an inexhaustible subject… (Just a little thought from the author, you can use it as a reference when you're feeling creatively drained.) Anyway, that's all for now. Well written, Brother Junjun! By the way, my protagonist also wields a sword… Here's a little poem, let's encourage each other! "Zhu Xian disregards the path to immortality, his heart harbors boundless wind and thunder. Who among gods and ghosts pities the rain of humanity? With a swift stroke of the sword, he slays all the demons under heaven." (ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ I really didn't come here to advertise, I really didn't come here to advertise, I really didn't come here to advertise… Hmm, I feel much better now.)

A follow-up visit to "The Flame God's Sealing Across Myriad Realms". The author's writing style is completely different from mine, so I really can't comment on the details. I just have a few questions. The work is in the style of martial arts, but it's written more like fantasy, which might not be suitable. If the author decides to write a longer work, this style will definitely be very challenging. If the author wants to write a short and concise work, then the article needs to be repeatedly revised, ideally written in large batches and then slowly released. Also, some settings I find strange. The following are all complaints; I just had to say them, and I hope the author understands. I also welcome the author to criticize my work. For example, in the first chapter, wouldn't the powerful figure just go and steal the divine sword himself? If it's predestined, what's the point of writing about it? And would the old man in the first chapter be struck dead by lightning or beaten to death by a group of people if he went out to steal the divine sword? The work would be more appealing if it were simply about how the heavens tricked the supporting characters and made the protagonist succeed. In the second chapter, doesn't it seem strange that the usually strict and demanding father suddenly interacts so much with his child? A single word of encouragement would have sufficed, yet he went to such lengths. Furthermore, Zi Yueting's performance was utterly immature; he didn't seem like a child who had received strict and demanding upbringing. I seriously doubt how much of that strictness was genuine. In Chapter Two, when the man in black begged for mercy, he actually started blaming Yin Luo—what kind of begging was that? The man in black jumped away before launching his surprise attack, despite having so many opportunities beforehand. And then he talked so much nonsense during the attack; should I criticize his fast talking or slow attack? The man in black clearly knew he was doomed, yet he waited for Yin Luo to make his move before attacking himself—didn't he deserve to be killed? And this is supposed to be talent?! And when Yin Luo was ambushed, he could still ramble on and on, and even when killing, he had to ramble on and on—isn't this what they call a villain who talks too much and deserves to die? When the man in black and Yin Luo were fighting, didn't he know a sword is longer than a hand? He actually used a sword to block a hand; he could have just thrust directly at him! I really don't know if the man in black has ever fought. When the man in black clashed with Yin Luo, his sword was shattered by Yin Luo's Iron Palm. I want to complain, is the sword made of wood? A palm technique that can shatter a sword is just an Iron Palm! Iron Palm! At most, other people's Iron Palm can't cut through a sword; they can grab the blade and break it with their strength. And after shattering the sword, it only sent the man in black flying a few meters. Should I complain that the man in black is too heavy? Yin Luo's first reaction upon hearing that the man in black's whereabouts had been exposed was to kill him instead of asking if anyone was following him. Is he really a spy? And what's with the "speed of spreading news for a hundred miles"? When the man in black was finally taken in, he was still wondering if this person was a good guy. I'm speechless that there are such pure people in the world. Li Yi's martial arts skills are among the best in Zi Yue. Should I complain that Zi Yue's combat strength is too low or that they actually let someone with such high combat strength be a bodyguard? Chapter 3: If I were the local young master, and someone rode a horse recklessly through the streets without any special markings, charging towards me, I would definitely teach them a lesson. You say they're one of my family members? I'd say, why don't you have my family's insignia? Even if you don't, couldn't you have asked the guards for one when you entered the city? Don't tell me you just charged through the city gates; I'd kill all the guards. Chapter 4: Recruiting people? You're recruiting people to save the world? Is it really okay to hold a martial arts competition after only one day of announcement? Sigh! I won't say anything more. Since the author of this novel used a martial arts writing style and included some detailed descriptions, they should consider plausibility; otherwise, it's just lowering the reader's intelligence. Either write something more reasonable, or change it to a mindless, straightforward storyline. Finally, I welcome your feedback on my work.

Not bad, not bad, I like it.

Good morning. I've been busy with signing contracts lately and haven't had time to visit you. Every contract signing is rushed and stressful. I don't know if we'll be able to sign this time.

Nice

"The Journey to the Faraway Prison" has come to visit. I'm currently reading your work and have clicked to add it to my favorites.

Xie Fusheng visited your esteemed author with his new book, "The Beginning, the End, and the Predestined Fate of a Hundred Lifetimes," hoping to collect it. He hopes the author can take some time out of his busy schedule to read it, and also requests that you click on the book, collect it, and give it a flower. He would be extremely grateful!

I'm here to support you with "The Lament of the Fallen Begonia"! Keep it up! I've added it to my favorites!