The Bewitching Twin Phoenixes

This novel truly broke my heart. I didn't know how to write the story perfectly, or even how to write it at all. I lacked shrewdness and my ideas were somewhat one-sided. The writing wasn't grand enough, and the content wasn't concise enough. I think these were my biggest problems. The hasty ending was a last-minute decision. There was no bad ending; the plot had reached its point, and continuing would have been pointless. I only hoped that *Bewildering the World* could bring joy. This is a novel, or rather, a story. It may not be exciting or glamorous, but I did my best to finish it. After so many twists and turns, it's finally over. I'm both happy and sad. But I want to say goodbye. *Bewildering the World* is over. Goodbye to my past self. Let's start anew. A new year brings a new look. I will make up for my shortcomings and reach new heights. Happiness and sadness—my first novel is finished. For me, it's growth, it's an achievement, for better or for worse. This is my result, and I accept it. A bowl of barley wine, telling of all the joys and sorrows—I'll drink it! To *Bewildering the World*, to myself, and to 2017!

A million-word masterpiece! After reading the synopsis and the first chapters, it sounds like a thrilling read. I'm hooked! Thumbs up!

The book is very well written; the first chapter was very captivating. I need to get back to writing now. I'll save this for later. Keep it up! ^0^~

Great! Keep up the good work! Keep it up!

Good morning

I remember when I first saw this book I was in fourth grade, now I'm in seventh grade.

Does the author have any plans to start a new book?

Urging for an update~~~?

Great work, I have read your excellent piece, "Half a Meter of Sunshine in Blue Mountain South".

Great masters are meant to be worshipped, great masters are meant to be showered with praise, great masters are like fellow learners visiting from "Half a Meter of Sunshine Blue Mountain South".