Time Dragon: Saving the Path of Time

I'm visiting from the End Times, hoping for guidance from all the experts!

I checked in at noon and gave it a little flower! Why hasn't it been updated?

Finally, I've bookmarked this page and will check back from time to time. I think communication between authors is a great way to improve, and authors should visit this page more often to see other people's work.

This isn't criticism, just some personal opinions from a reader's perspective. I don't expect the author to adopt everything; I'm just a newcomer myself, and I'm gradually entering the world of online novels by asking for help and researching whenever I encounter doubts. Those who truly care about you aren't the silent ones beside you, but rather the ones who nag and say unpleasant things...

This is the first time I've written such a long review. The reason is simply that I hope the author can complete this work even better. In my life, I don't admire people with great talent, nor do I admire people who are more handsome than me; I only admire people with perseverance and a sense of responsibility. Also, I want to complain about the title. At first glance, I thought it was a fantasy novel. After reading the beginning and the book title bar, I realized it wasn't. However, the chapter titles inside gave me the feeling that it was a fantasy novel… Science fiction, science fiction! When there's too much science, it becomes boring to read; when there's too much fantasy, it feels too far removed from science. There are plenty of people who write science fiction like fantasy.

The proportions of character portrayal, plot narration, and environmental description in the whole text should not be so disproportionate. From the first chapter to the end, I didn't even know where the two people were standing and talking. I only knew that they kept talking. I also didn't really know what kind of person the protagonist was or what he looked like. Everything was like looking at flowers through a fog. However, from the words "great joy and great anxiety without backing down," I could still vaguely feel that the protagonist was a person with a somewhat impulsive personality and a relatively strong will.

I haven't read many chapters. After looking at the related information and the first two chapters, my first impression was confusion and bewilderment. I believe few people would be willing to skip the beginning and start reading from the later chapters without knowing who the protagonist, Canglong, is, who Mr. Li is, where he comes from, or what he does. This opening montage is incredibly confusing. Perhaps the author wanted to create suspense to keep the reader engaged, but suspense and confusion are two different concepts. If we use a road as an analogy, suspense is like a narrow, winding path that leads nowhere, but there might be some attractive scenery along the way. Confusion, on the other hand, is like a fog in front of you, with nothing under your feet, making it difficult for the reader to know where to step or how to continue reading.

I visited your site shortly after you started writing your book, and several months later I saw you update again. Regardless of the outcome, your hard work and perseverance deserve everyone's respect. Here are the last two flowers for you! I hope to see you finish your book.

Is time in the world out of order? You write so well! Sending flowers and adding to my collection of "Super Era War God" to support @zhenzhen00431. Looking forward to your return visit and collection, thank you.

790,000 words already, it's time to sign a contract! "The Path of Immortal Heroes" is visiting, hoping the author will visit in return.