Armed Moe Girls

Hello, I have a favor to ask. I recently wrote a new book called "Bookmarks for Old Books." It's my first time writing a book, and I'm a bit unsure about it, haha. So, I'd like to ask if you could take a look at my book and write a fairly long review with your feedback. I'd like to see some genuine thoughts and opinions after reading it. You can evaluate my book from a reader's or fellow book lover's perspective. Thank you in advance! I know this is asking too much, but I'm eager for guidance, after all, we should help each other out as fellow writers.

Well written, I love this kind of story. It feels similar to Kantai Collection (Kantai Collection). Keep it up, author!

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You don't want perfect attendance anymore? ∑(￣□￣)

Since you've come all this way, aren't you going to welcome me? (Pats shoulder)

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A written text that cannot be read aloud is a failing text. This is true without exception throughout history and across the world. Whether or not a text can be read aloud is the primary factor in determining its quality. You'll understand once you think about it.

Your text also has the same deficiency. The fact that your text can't be read aloud isn't a minor issue; it reflects a lack of basic novel-writing skills. Add index sentences before the dialogue. This would allow you to describe the emotions, atmosphere, and characters' tone and mindset—wouldn't that be better? Rows of dialogue without indexes are a bad habit in online writing. Don't follow suit; if you're going to learn, learn the good stuff. Don't let bad writing styles corrupt you. I wish you happy writing!

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Love it! Saved! Keep it up! I've learned so much! @Xiaoxiaofei @xiaoxiaofei @xiaoxiaofei