Reincarnation Paradise: Network Dream Weaver

The shortcoming is that the servants are not well written. The servants in the original novel are all cute and have their own personalities, which can be combined with the same killing and killing by Byakuya. The follower's writing of this fanfic is a mess, and its only function is to water down the word count. No other use

It's weird. The protagonist's inheritance is so shady. I understand that you regard strong support ability as a characteristic. It is indeed very satisfying to be an assistant daddy. But please don't write the protagonist's individual combat ability so conservatively, okay? Now when I see the first-level promotion to the world, I often say that this opponent is too strong and the protagonist can't beat it. Why don't you look at your silver-coin skills and inheritance? Are there anyone at the same level who can compete with you? Su Xiao is almost invincible. You, Su Xiao, have to step aside, but when they encounter a strong monster, they say they can't beat it.

Does the protagonist have his own career path? The special points of integrating into the power of the abyss are not written out either. What if Hill can save Fei and wait until the protagonist appears? Whether the ability to heal souls or obtained from Paradise has nothing to do with profession, what is so special about Doctor Abyss? The connections feel like they all belong to Hill. In fact, according to what the author wrote, it's better to write soul healing as a special profession. That's why there were so many favors from the Abyss Doctor camp. Otherwise, just rely on medical skills, night doctors, and other paradise milks won't work? The protagonist's own connections are ridiculous. Where does the friendship come from when selling equipment? It can heal the soul. I don't see the protagonist saving a few people to increase his connections. And the army of gods. The author really wants to cultivate the protagonist by himself? Isn't this nonsense? There are Zerg in White Night, so the protagonist must have a legion, right? There are trees in White Night, and the protagonist must also have one. The protagonist also practices swordsmanship in White Night. The competition is also written very nonsense. The Void clan licks the protagonist in various ways, the level boss, and various favors. You might as well write them directly to the protagonist. Favors are compared with actual benefits. I haven't seen the protagonist show much value for the time being. The ability to heal souls can only cure a few people. Hill, the old destroyer, the one from the Feather Tribe, add a saint. There are a lot of tricks for the protagonist, but the combat ability is on par with Bai Ye. Oh, and there are pets. After sleeping for so long, when I finally wake up, I find that the protagonist has a legion of gods, an ancient god in the infant stage. Isn't this funny?

The data is too outrageous. According to him, the first level can even defeat Bai Ye's third or even fourth level.

There is nothing beyond the original content of "Reincarnation Paradise", the cheating is too serious

I can only say that the description of general battles is not good, and I can't understand the overall situation and the logic is almost impossible.

Nothing special, sounds like I'm going to sleep

The writing is too embarrassing. At the first level, you can restore tens of thousands of blood with just one healing spell. It's not interesting.