Miss Heroine, Please Stop

As an old bookworm, let me evaluate this book. The author actually writes well. The plot is reasonable, although some parts are a bit far-fetched, but it doesn't have a big impact. The emotional scenes are not very good, and seeing that the protagonist's emotional scenes are all ambiguous without confessing (the protagonist has no initiative at all), I was really upset that he could continue to be ambiguous after biting General Ning. This shows that the author is really good at writing. The fighting scene is also difficult to comment on. It was written but I felt it was not written. The protagonist had no fighting ability in the early stage, so he built an ammunition depot to stabilize his fighting strength. As a result, he became a waste once he started and no one could beat him. Summary: This book can be read or not read with your brain. Although the author wants to write reasonably, he can't. Please understand.

After reading more than 300 chapters, I can't stand it anymore. I don't quite understand why the author writes about the relationship between men and women in such a sexy way. Does he have any special quirks? As for the female protagonists, the characters of Gu Yuerong and Ning Wanyan are very well written. When there were no plots for other female characters in the early stage, these two characters were perfectly created through a lot of pen and ink. But the heroines in the back are a bit stretched. Take the more than 300 chapters I have read. Among the heroines that have appeared, the princess and Zhu Xiangyan are like two psychopaths with no sense of boundaries. The master and Song Qingfu are inexplicably given away in a very short plot.

He said he was not a supervisor, but after reading more than 200 chapters, all of them were confiscated. It's a bit disgusting.

Defame the heroine. The heroine sticks to the marriage contract for the sake of the contract, but look at how the author describes the heroine, a gold digger who was abandoned by the second generation of rich people? Is the Prime Minister's daughter a gold worshiper?

Very well written

In the world of high martial arts, if you can dodge bullets by reciting poems and writing poems, can your literary style still flourish?

I'm speechless. It was good up to chapter 300, but after chapter 300, the old man would come out to cause trouble every time, and he kept making trouble. According to the character of the protagonist, he should be killed, but he just kept holding it in.

After the 200th chapter, there is obviously more nonsense and the plot is quite dragging.