Tempered Immortal

This novel is a very traditional novel. It gets better and better the more you read it. Unlike the current cool novels, which only have explosive points in the early stage and no interesting points in the later stage, this novel has many interesting points in the later stage and a long emotional line. The plot is also advanced in layers. It is worthy of being a novel that has been written for six years. It is also the fourteenth novel that I have read with more than 1,000 pages. The overall feeling is very good. The author's writing style is also improving at every level. You can watch it with confidence. After reading it, it is very good from the early stage to the later stage.

When the protagonist wants something from another sect, he basically waits for the other sect to fight with others and benefit from it himself. Sometimes it is even because of his own reasons that he causes wars between other sects. There is no enmity between the protagonist and other sects, it is just because that sect has what he wants, and he knows that his actions will cause wars between other sects⚔but he still fishes in troubled waters with peace of mind. When the Nascent Soul was condensed, there were no inner demons. Look at Han Laomo. He had inner demons just because of the little green bottle, and he also had "plug-ins" and unreasonably caused wars between other sects, but he was so at ease.

Generally speaking, it's okay. There are no enemies that come out of nowhere, or opportunities that come across out of nowhere. They are all step-by-step, careful in everything, a bit like Han Laomo in a mortal cultivating immortality.

The main character in the novel is very violent, has bad views, is a villain, and often starts a harem. Moreover, the author always writes a request for votes at the end of every chapter, and often writes a lot of life accounts. I came to read the novel to relax, not to read the story of a villain cultivating immortality.

Writing a book is like trying to make up the number of words. The plot is not compact. You write a long paragraph to explain something clearly in one sentence. Are you looking down on the readers' ability to understand? And Yue'er should have died a long time ago. It's useless. She only wants to live forever, but she wants to fall in love with a soul.

Talking too much

The characters in the novel are so strange that they are indescribably strange. No wonder the novel is not popular.

In the Spiritual Movement Realm, grab things from Foundation Establishment. In the Foundation Establishment Realm, grab things from Ningdan. Every time you go out, you must save a woman.

The protagonist's halo is too strong, it's too unreasonable. Whatever the protagonist wants, something will happen immediately, and the protagonist can get it at random. Also, the heroine directly betrays her at the beginning with no emotional basis at all. It's too outrageous.

It's too easy to become an immortal if you are willing to endure hardships.