The True Immortal of Bright Jade

After listening to four to five hundred chapters, let me tell you my feelings. 1. There is a problem with the character of the protagonist. Why doesn't he even have any friends after he has cultivated to the golden elixir? Although it is an online article, the author lacks even the most basic values. Internet articles are not a cesspit, but also a place to teach people how to behave. They must have the most basic personality, right? But after reading four or five hundred chapters of this book, I only saw a white-eyed wolf who is only profit-seeking, ruthless, moody, and extremely controlling. No matter how good others are to him, he feels that he deserves it, and others deserve to be good to him, but as long as the person who is good to him is a little bit more If he doesn't listen to a word of his, he will lose his temper and kill others. Labels that say he is intelligent and decisive online are all lies. The protagonist is pure and white-eyed, ruthless and ruthless. From the book to the person, it can be seen that the author has a similar personality to the protagonist in real life. No wonder they got divorced. You can't bear to marry such a person. No wonder this book is not a big hit. There are problems with the characters in the book. It is not half as good as "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality"! ! ! I hope netizens will watch with caution

The plot is exciting and not cliché, and the writing is also good. It has the caution and prudence of a mortal cultivating immortality, and a sense of familiarity as he pursues the path of immortality step by step.

People watching this plot are baffled, and then it is a brainless and cool routine of practicing Qi, slashing and building foundation.

Others are fine, but some things were added that shouldn't be added. Drawing a tiger is not an anti-dog. I changed some things that shouldn't be changed. It's understandable that I want to be unique, but the whole thing, sword spirit root, piano spirit root, bamboo spirit root, bitter spirit root, whatever.

This storyline is really hopeless. The way to take revenge on the enemy is to become the other party's black miner? ! Able to live a pure protagonist halo

It's okay to watch, but the male protagonist is still not likable.

It took more than fifty chapters to reach the first level during the Qi training period. Later on, how to write Nascent Soul and Transformation God?

The author is afraid that he cannot distinguish between cultivating immortality and cultivating the truth, and has confused them together.

Why isn't this book popular? I think it's okay.

The author doesn't update anymore. The novel is very good.