Wanhua Immortal Way

Very interesting, no nonsense, compact plot, worth watching. The only fly in the ointment is that the protagonist is at the fifth level of the Fire Spirit Root. Eating dragon fruit can change his qualifications. The protagonist eats dragon fruit as food. After eating so much, why is there no change at all? This is not written down, the specific effect is

After struggling to read Chapter 87, I personally think this article has the following features: First, the author did not pay attention to punctuation marks. There are no punctuation marks in many places, which directly leads to the difficulty of taking a breath while reading and the feeling of suffocation. Please pay attention to this point. Second, the total number of words in this article does not exceed 2 million. So far, I have not seen any words about Chelulu that were made up to make up the number of words. However, a considerable amount of words are nonsense, which has no effect on the development of the plot or the description of the characters. Third, the qualifications of the pig's trotters portrayed in the article are relatively weak. After the author's perfect description, the characters in the article are not only useless in kung fu, but also in IQ and character. This is especially obvious from the time when pig's feet enter the sect to the first experience around chapter 80. Fourth, my nose is a little crooked after reading this article.

So pretty.

It feels great!

It's too long-winded, so I'm jumping to read it.

There are too many typos. I will give you a name later.

The logic is very poor, and my head is full of question marks.

It's very bad. It's not as good as a primary school student's composition. The logic is illogical, the expression is unclear, the setting is unreasonable, and everything is confusing. It is probably a book written under the influence of alcohol. It is recommended not to enter!

There are modern words. It feels inconsistent!

Junk writing